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AznDudeIsOn
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PostSubject: Poem#4 TB!?   Poem#4 TB!? Icon_minitimeWed Mar 17, 2010 8:26 pm

Ode to my Toothbrush
Every morning and night I used you
I coated you with a mint paste
Rubbing vigorously against plaque as I felt a mint taste
You experienced friction
And the ends of your hairs frayed

My breath felt cool daily
I became refreshed daily
I was cleansed and restored
While at your demise you wore and tore

No longer firm and you grew weak
My mouth became dirtier by the week
Against your own will you reached your peak


03/18/10
~Jackie Cho


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Abbx
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PostSubject: Re: Poem#4 TB!?   Poem#4 TB!? Icon_minitimeFri Mar 19, 2010 1:00 am

Why are you making so many poems lately lol. And why about teeth? Ironic Im brushing my teeth to go to bed this very moment lol.
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AznDudeIsOn
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PostSubject: Re: Poem#4 TB!?   Poem#4 TB!? Icon_minitimeFri Mar 19, 2010 7:20 am

Abbx wrote:
Why are you making so many poems lately lol. And why about teeth? Ironic Im brushing my teeth to go to bed this very moment lol.
English class dude.
And it's not about teeth it's about a toothbrush.
I had to create a poem called Ode to *insert house hold object here*

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PostSubject: Re: Poem#4 TB!?   Poem#4 TB!? Icon_minitimeFri Mar 19, 2010 8:55 am

AznDudeIsOn wrote:
Ode to my Toothbrush
Every morning and night I used you
I coated you with a mint paste
Rubbing vigorously against plaque as I felt a mint taste
You experienced friction
And the ends of your hairs frayed

My breath felt cool daily
I became refreshed daily
I was cleansed and restored
While at your demise you wore and tore

No longer firm and you grew weak
My mouth became dirtier by the week
Against your own will you reached your peak


03/18/10
~Jackie Cho
o.o im speachless,you touched me with ur nice words about your toothbrush jackster.
Nice work plox..
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