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PostSubject: Poem #2 Come read, if you want. I'm just posting it somewhere   Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:16 am

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Doctors diagnose me with scoliosis
Life habits change, for a healthier way
Growing up to become an elderly man
Healthier than I would be without Scoliosis
Living a steady life, with little surprises
Often bored to death
Spending time with grandchildren
Playing board games, and letting them win
Joyfully watching them frolicking with glee
Reminiscing my naďve childhood
Wanting to join the fun
I become seeker in “Hide and Seek”
Overwhelmed with excitement, searching for my grandchildren
And pretending I can’t see them
I start to lose energy
World becomes darker
Grandchildren calling for “pawpaw”.

~Jackie Cho
10th grade 03/11/10
BTW-The actual poem has a swervy structure. But it doesn't appear in the post.

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PostSubject: Re: Poem #2 Come read, if you want. I'm just posting it somewhere   Fri Mar 12, 2010 7:47 pm

LOL. You're still doing /09?! DAMN! I got over that in February!
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PostSubject: Re: Poem #2 Come read, if you want. I'm just posting it somewhere   Fri Mar 12, 2010 8:58 pm

Abbx wrote:
LOL. You're still doing /09?! DAMN! I got over that in February!
fixed.

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PostSubject: Re: Poem #2 Come read, if you want. I'm just posting it somewhere   Sat Mar 13, 2010 2:07 am

errrrrr ur still doing poems? post it on a REAL artist site!!

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PostSubject: Re: Poem #2 Come read, if you want. I'm just posting it somewhere   Sat Mar 13, 2010 12:29 pm

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errrrrr ur still doing poems? post it on a REAL artist site!!
Like where?

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PostSubject: Re: Poem #2 Come read, if you want. I'm just posting it somewhere   Sun Mar 14, 2010 5:47 pm

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support_tails wrote:
errrrrr ur still doing poems? post it on a REAL artist site!!
Like where?

ipoemyou.com i think

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