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PostSubject: Cold to Cozy   Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:55 am

Cold to Cozy.
Walking through a blanket of cold layered on earth.
Wanting to feel a hearth, as silence is broken by steps.
My only witnesses are lost and chirping,
The world seems slow as my warmth becomes engulfed, by a growing blanket.

I stop.
The only red I see, Turns green.
I go.

I smell the air. A unique smell only smelled on this time of the year.
It feels like Iím in a time machine. As what should have been fifteen minutes,
Took forty.
I breathe in the air. Another feeling only felt on this time of the year.

I stop.
I hear creaking.
I go.
I take off the blanket Iíve gained, and it dissipates.

I hear a whistle.
I stir.
I begin to consume what I mixed.
I wrap a blanket around me and the world dissipates.

~Jackie Cho
10th grade 03/04/10

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PostSubject: Re: Cold to Cozy   Sun Mar 07, 2010 3:12 am

Either this was an assignment, you got it from the internet, or you were on powerful crack to make you think this up lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Cold to Cozy   Sun Mar 07, 2010 12:29 pm

Abbx wrote:
Either this was an assignment, you got it from the internet, or you were on powerful crack to make you think this up lol.
This was an assignment lol. Shiet, you know I wouldn't do shit like this. This shit for wussies.

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PostSubject: Re: Cold to Cozy   Sun Mar 07, 2010 9:39 pm

Lol i might use this in two weeks for my poem assignment if i do go to my baseball game which i cant start in becuz of a dam injury D= *1st base all star, working on 2nd base =D
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PostSubject: Re: Cold to Cozy   Mon Mar 08, 2010 2:18 pm

i dont get it is this some kind of poem? cuz i dont get what it suppose to mean...

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PostSubject: Re: Cold to Cozy   Mon Mar 08, 2010 6:51 pm

support_tails wrote:
i dont get it is this some kind of poem? cuz i dont get what it suppose to mean...
yes it's a poem.


BTW how do u think of my poem kid rush?

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PostSubject: Re: Cold to Cozy   Tue Mar 09, 2010 2:52 am

A implicet poem about going to sleep? Nice job.

I would give a 9/10.
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